Unspoken
These verses give me license to expressWhat tongue is apprehensive to reveal.This camouflage of scripted tendernessEnshrouds me once again. For you I feelAffection that afflicts my tool of speech.A...
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Museeker: First of all, welcome and I hope you find what you're seeking. There are some high points in this sonnet, but the diction still needs work. In 2, I would suggest "tongues are"--tongue in the...
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Mike,First of all, thanks so much for your critique. I have long been searching for a venue that would offer me some constructive and insightful feedback about my sonnets.Now to the reply: I used...
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